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Originally posted by 银河 at 2005-4-13 02:25 恩这个还行,字面工整了,但不压韵,看看‘年’‘圆’,‘风’‘朝’,得压韵;和‘离’、‘死’就远了一些,但不错了,对出来了很好了
Originally posted by 经营许可证 at 2005-4-13 02:23 有时候文采是憋出来的~~~
Originally posted by 银河 at 2005-4-13 02:28 我就是想当斑斑憋出来的
Originally posted by 经营许可证 at 2005-4-13 02:27 咯咯咯咯,我历来不对对子,除非老师非得叫我对~~
Originally posted by 银河 at 2005-4-13 02:31 这个对子也是我第一次对对子,没上论谈前一次也没对过,是两分钟对出来的
Originally posted by 银河 at 2005-4-13 02:32 不过是看了第一个女孩的对子,受的启发要不也不行的
Originally posted by 经营许可证 at 2005-4-13 02:29 我心里憋的难受就会写东西,写完就......烧
Originally posted by 银河 at 2005-4-13 02:33 别呀,发到论谈上,也让大家感受一下呀
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